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Post by roger ;; on Wed Jun 19, 2013 3:42 am

Hallo! I am very new here, and have yet to own a Kiamara of my own.

I hope to change that, soon.

You see, I am trying out for my dream Kia, 266. I need critique on my form . You have the right to be as brutally honest as possible. Please tell me what I can do to help increase my chaces of winning her? I really love her and want her so badly!
PM me on CS or post here, I really could care less, so long as I get the critique. c":
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Post by Lana. on Wed Jun 19, 2013 4:21 am

It looks good, but maybe you could try making the main text a smaller size? Perhaps 85? Otherwise, it takes up a lot of the post. c: But apart from that, it looks really good. You could maybe even add a little bit color- just make sure it isn't anything too neon.
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Post by AmberSky345 on Wed Jun 19, 2013 12:25 pm

Looking lovely!

Try spacing each part out a bit more, it makes things easier to read. I agree with lana about the colour and text size. I love how everything is in chapters!!! Lots of detail XD Using quote boxes and plenty of matching colours often helps a lot, and I could show you my form for a Kia I'm trying out for, for inspiration. Maybe you could put some lovely tumblr images in your form to, that match with the colour scheme?

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Post by roger ;; on Wed Jun 19, 2013 7:23 pm

Oh, danke to you all for the kind words! c: @Amber, I'd love to see your form.
And I'll try all that you kind friends have suggested. c:
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Post by AmberSky345 on Fri Jun 21, 2013 12:00 pm

Here it is! I really hope you win this!!!

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